Some Writing Tips


Here are some easy-to-follow writing tips. Try them.

1 Avoid the awkward use of he/she isms, commonly used to avoid gender bias, with the use of the third-person plural.
Use they (subject), them (object), and their (possessive) instead.
You could also use "one" here, like "One can determine...". Though it might be a bit pretentious.
2 Avoid interjecting the first-person singular (I) in your technical writing. Use the third-person (it, the author), instead. The exception to this is when expressing a personal opinion. In this case, you might use something like "it is the author's opinion that ..." or "this author believes that ...".
Often people use "we", even if there is only one author, which is a bit strange, but true.
3 Avoid casual idioms, cliches, and flowery metaphors. e.g., brick and mortar, developer's playground, Information Highway
4 Ensure that you have correct subject-verb-object agreement.
5 Eliminate extraneous noise and useless language. Your writing should be crisp, concise and clear. (Your reader will love you for this.)
6 When using the abbreviation for "for example", use the proper abbreviation, followed by a comma, a space, and the example that you are citing. (e.g., ...) Similarly, "that is" should be "i.e., ". (from the latin "id est")
7 Balance your phrases properly. e.g., first, second, third ...; either, or; one, another; one, the other. Do not overuse these phrase types. When you have sentences made of many phrases or clauses make sure to separate them correctly with punctuation, else it's very difficult to read.
8 Keep your tense consistent. Usually, if something presently occurs, speak in the active voice. Most descriptions of the current environment are in the active voice.
9 Have a teammate (or friend) read what you have written. Chances are, if something is unclear to them, then you need to improve the clarity of the identified problem area. This can often be done by reorganizing the structure or eliminating ambiguous areas. (Try not to be too defensive - rather view their time and suggestions as constructive opportunities.)
10 Avoid using conjunctions in formal writing (unlike what I'm doing here). It is for it's, could not for couldn't, etc. (also avoid using etc.)
11 When writing a large document in a group, make sure that everyone has carefully read and proofread all sections written by themselves and their teammates. It can be useful to assign someone to be a final editor. Often groups will divide up sections of the writing. If this is done without careful proofreading and editing it results in obvious shifts in authorship including inconsistency in terminology, style, and content. Check for this.
12 Finally ... Always use a spelling-checker. Never submit anything that has not been checked for spelling mistakes!

Also, Debby Repka provides a writing course WRT30X which is available to you. I took a course with her and it was extremely helpful. You cannot go wrong by improving your ability to communicate.

My thanks to Jennifer Horkoff for proof-reading this, and adding some useful additions :-)